tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11367545.post950057765483802456..comments2024-03-23T08:38:29.067-04:00Comments on EricHerboso.org: Review: mad investor chaos and the woman of asmodeusEric Herbosohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07888413471076959781noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11367545.post-48077158039067958512022-02-07T03:28:23.158-05:002022-02-07T03:28:23.158-05:00Update one week later:
(SPOILER WARNING)
A few d...Update one week later:<br /><br />(SPOILER WARNING)<br /><br />A few days after posting this review, the Gregoria character has started to lampshade the specific concerns about sex listed in the above review. These are literally new personality traits grafted onto this character in-story — I’m honestly amazed at the skill with which the authors have pulled off a legitimate inclusion of this point of view into the story while simultaneously making it feel like it could have been planned that way all along.<br /><br />I like this about the authors. Earlier in the story, a reader asked why a character didn’t just use a teleport spell; a few days later, a reason was given in-story as to why a teleport spell was not used. This level of agility is impressive in any writer, and it is especially appreciated in a story like this.<br /><br />In my review of The Erogamer, I applauded how the author was taking into account what people in the forum were saying, and how that affected the direction of the story in ways that I can’t say here without spoiling its plot. I’m equally impressed by the authors of <i>mad investor chaos and the woman of asmodeus</i> for their commitment to taking feedback seriously and updating on it in-text.<br /><br />Well done.Eric Herbosohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07888413471076959781noreply@blogger.com